Your headline is the gateway to your advertisement. It will either
entice your reader to continue reading, or turn them of before
they've read a single word about your product. A good headline
translates into leads.
Headlines are the first thing the eye falls on. If it loses your
reader's attention, you automatically lose a potential lead. This
translates into a single fact: your headline is what sells your product.
An effective headline will be impossible to resist, and it will force
the reader to learn more about your product or service.
You only have a few seconds to seize your reader's attention. That
being said, it is imperative that you earn how to write good, if
not brilliant headlines. Let's start by examining what the function of
a headline is.
A headline should grab the reader's attention, communicate
potential benefits to that reader, and set-up an expectation of
what will follow in the body of the ad-and the headline must do this all
at once, instantaneously! Additionally, an effective headline is a filter
that attracts your target audience.
Your headline should be educational rather than overly commercial.
The best headlines declare an issue or a problem faced by marketing
professionals, and they contain the subtle promise of your product or
service being able to solve that problem.
For example,"How to?" headlines work well because they appeal to
the need for information. Headlines written as a question appeal to
the reader's emotions because they will automatically want that
question answered and be moved to read on. Headlines written as
commands, such as "Double your traffic?" focusing on the most vital
benefit of your product or service literally demands your reader's
attention.
Another strategy is using a news item as headline copy, such as
announcing your new breakthrough service. Finally, consider using the
best sentence, subtly rewritten, from a testimonial: My traffic has
increased by 50% and sales are at an all time high! Testimonials,
which must always be reliable and true to their source, inspire your
potential customer's trust and peak their interest.
Obviously, learning how to write elective headlines is essential. But to
do that, you must first understand what the qualities of effective
headlines are.
An effective headline must be immediately credible. You have to
make a claim, but it must not sound impossible or miraculous. If it
sounds too amazing, the reader will not believe you, and you will lose
them before you get the chance to explain your product or service.
Following this line of reasoning, effective headlines must also be
short because the average reader's attention span is short. For the
same reason that sound bites work, headlines must be brief and
notable. They must be easy to remember, and even better, impossible
to forget. Quotation marks work well in headlines, for example, because
they both grab the eye and the reader's attention. This is most likely
due to the conditioning people receive from reading books. A reader
tend to focus more on whats being said within the quotation marks.
Use no more than fifteen words at the most. The shorter the better,
so eliminate all extraneous words, such as adjectives and adverbs.
These words can make a headline sound unbelievable or like hype, so
only use these modifiers in your ad copy.
Headlines should appeal to the reader's emotions rather than their
intellect. Generally, strong emotions motivate people to take action,
and the more powerful the emotion, the faster the action. So aim to
write headlines that inspire awe, excitement, curiosity, even fear, and
you will have solidly caught your reader's attention.
Write in the active voice, using the first or second person. Keep all
your verbs in the present tense, as it makes the headline more
immediate. Aim to write a headline that is in the imperative tense in
order to motivate your reader to take some kind of action. In this
case, reading on to the rest of the ad.
Think of how you grab someone's attention verbally in your life.
You use strong, direct, imperative language. You use strong action
verbs and direct nouns and phrases. The same method should be
applied to your headline. You want to stop the reader in their
tracks, but then be sure to hold onto their attention.
After you have their focus, aim to entice them by hinting at what
your product may do for them. You must accomplish this is in as
little words as possible.
The best way to figure out how to entice your audience is to have a
clear sense of exactly who your target audience is. Understand what
motivates them, what their interests, passions, and priorities are, and
what they are looking for.
What is it that causes this target audience to take some kind of
action? Once you answer these questions, choose words that will
arouse this audience's interest.
However, make sure that your headlines are 100% truthful, accurate,
and above all, credible-and your advertising copy must support the
claim your headline makes.
It's a good idea to test market different headlines. Once you get
the hang of writing them, try out a different headline as you update your
ads, and keep track of what ads received the most responses. These
are the two or three headlines that you should build your marketing
campaign around.
The content of your message in a safelist ad should be educational.
Include case studies, research results, testimonials, anecdotes, and the
relevant benefits of your product or service.
Focus on the most important benefits your customers will receive
from your product. Be specific and stick to facts, don't use hyperbole. Be
as down-to-earth as possible or you will sound unbelievable. You want to
keep the focus on your product,not on yourself, and you want to appeal to
a wide range of different types of people.
It's a good idea to include a compelling story. Focus on what makes
your product or service unique, and then find a story that illustrates how a
customer was able to effectively make use of this uniqueness. This story
should lead the reader to an offer that will compel some form of action.
Offer something upfront, such as a free article, a discount, a free
trial offer, or even a free ebook. Then immediately follow it with a link to
that offer that declares: CLICK HERE FOR FREE OFFER. This will
automatically bring the reader to your website where they can learn
more about your product.
Keep your message within 3 screens of text. You want it to be long
enough to contain all the relevant information and benefits, but not so
long that it will become a chore to read.
Make sure your copy is fluent, flowing, and easy to read. Eliminate
all spelling and grammatical mistakes. If you're giving out a lot of
information, break up the space using bulleted lists to give the reader's
eye a rest. A list should summarize the key benefits in an immediately
accessible form.
Make sure the text is easy to read, in a readable font, with enough
space between the lines. Use color only to emphasize points, and don't
use too much of it or it will become distracting. Avoid colored backgrounds,
as they are hard on the eyes. Use upper and lower case text. If you want to
use caps, save it for your headlines.
Use a blank line between paragraphs instead of an indent to increase the
white space on the page.
Keep your ad copy as brief as a single page if possible. The more emphatic
and condensed, the greater the possibility of maintaining reader attention.
Using Free safelists is a great way to try out different ad headlines and copy.
Monitor the results carefully until you've honed in on the most defective emails.
Then go on to subscribe to the Pro lists using your most effective ad copy.
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